Prologue Sketchimation

I REALLY hope this works. REALLY hope.

This is whats been keeping me occupied and semi-inactive these last few days/nights, I've been working on this! Finally starting to animate this, and I'm also really starting to believe this might actually happen!

So yeah, this is a sketchy animated part of the first episode of GoG I plan on making, in this you see the prologue and the beginning theme song. Some parts I'm still unsure about, and might redo, like the like the beak moving the egg, I feel thats a bit fast, as well as a few other parts(soren falling and getting smaller, Skench's eye), but you tell me what you think

XD Also, the last part with Soren and Gylfie sliding in opposite directions is supposed to be them walking, but I was to lazy and just did that. Probably go back and fix that before officially animating that part.

See the story board to get a better idea of how it will look when complete - [link]

At first I wasn't going to post it with music, I was going to wait until after I had finished it completely, or at least when I finished animating the theme song part, but I got impatient, and I wasn't sure if you guys would watch it all the way to the end since some of the frames last for a longer time.
The music also doesn't sound as good as it does when I'm editing it, but oh well...I'll try to fix that later on.
The music is a fan made remake of a song from a Kirby game, my favorite Kirby song next to the Zero Two theme.
I found it to be rather fitting (and catchy xD) since the song is falled " Factory Inspection" and St.Aggies was similar to a factory in someways. I dunno, it makes sense in my mind.

Heres the remake - [link]
The original - [link]

Like I already said, critique is welcome, but don't be to harsh! xD It is just a sketch after all, haha.

(C) art - Me
(C) Guardians of Ga'Hoole - Kathryn Lasky
(C) Song Remake - JohnFreeman1337 @ youtube and Nintendo
(C) Original Song/Music - Nintendo