GOG Series Ep1-P1 Story Board

Edit: I tryed to slow it down a bit, by request

Edit:Crap! I spelled Eglantine's name wrong again! Only one i, not two!

Woooooo! Look I finally started on this!
A story board for the first episode of the GoG animated series I want to do. I want to break it into parts, to make it easier and because the chapter is kind of broken into parts.
Here you can kind of see what I have planned, its going to start with the prologue and then transfer into the opening theme, then introduces the first episode.
The blue arrows are for "camera movements", the red arrows are for animated/character movements, the green is sound effects, and the pink/purple stars are for where I want to add in some fun facts, maybe, from the book that can't be conveyed through the animation and dialog. For example, where theres a star where Kludd is talking about branching, at the top I'd put some text explaining what branching is.
Also, I simplified the dialog, I just put it there so I'd have an idea of what goes where. It makes it kind of funny XD like when Kludd pops his head in saying "Brains"

This is pages -1 through 5, and there are 14 pages in the chapter. 9 more pages to go, wish me luck! x3

Please critique! Just because its a story board, doesn't mean its not critique-able! I'd love some feed back.

(C) art - Me
(C) Guardians of Ga'Hoole - Kathryn Lasky